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Answer the writing prompt below in complete sentences. You must write at least 5 complete sentences. Once you are done, you may leave feedback for another student.
If woke up from a strange nightmare and it came true, and I was captured by aliens I would think,"What the heck is happening". The first test I would to make sure I'm not asleep I wold slap myself as hard as I could. Once I'd figure out it was real life I would try to make friends with the aliens before they either eat me or put me in a cage. If they put me in a cage or a natural habitat I would just sleep or scream,"WHY ME". If I was stuck in that life I would just sleep till I die.
If I was captured by aliens and put in an alien zoo I would be really scared. When I get put in the zoo after the shock of it I would think of ways to get out of the zoo. If I ever got out I would tell all of the humans I see about it in case they come back for another human. If I never got back to earth I would still try to escape and get away from the aliens. If I never got out of the zoo I would just get used to it.
If I were captured by aliens I would probably feel really scared and shocked.But what I will do is I will try to talk to them and if the wont let me go will find a way to escape probably digging a hole out of there and once I get home I will call the police and tell my parents what happened to me.
If I was captured by aliens I would be freaked out. That is why we do not know what the aliens are capable of. And it would be good that they are in a zoo but it is still no safe enough. But I would be safer if it was in AREA 51 if it is real. and hopefully they would put the aliens back to there planet.
If I were put in a alien zoo I would probably just accept their food and try to stay alive as long as I could. While I'm there I would think of a way to get out. Of course I would be scared but not as scared if I just sat there thinking "When will they kill me?" Although the aliens might have higher technology and IQ's. Yeah...
If i were captured and put in a alien zoo i would be terrified to be in side a cage.i could relate because it is like school you just want to get out and go home to relax and play out side.If i was there i would be very shocked for what i would do there.if they feed me i would be mad i would keep pinching my self to see if i was just dreaming or this is real.the next time they open the gates i would make a run for it but whit the technology that they have i have no chance of getting out but it would be worth a try.But after all it was just a dream or that is what i think.
By: Devon Solis Well this is probably going down as the worst birthday ever. I was stuck in alien zoo (aka prison). And every time I scream for help it's like a lion roaring everybody cheers. I mean it sucks as it is but the aliens didn't even put a don"t touch the glass sign and that get's annoying quick. I've been marking the hours it's been at least 5. You're probably wondering how this happened. Well it was the day before my b-day,I had brushed my teeth and taken a shower.Right before I went to sleep I saw a shooting star well I was excited so I thought it was an alien ship.So I went to sleep imagining I was in a alien zoo I woke up expecting present's,but let me tell you I kind of want to return the one the alien's gave me. So I was stuck I had like 3 big rocks for me to climb a watering hole and a bucket where they put my food in when I was asleep.It's not like I got much though I was constantly hearing the tapping on the glass and I missed earth and silence. The next day I felt a plop on my shoulder I woke up to find some sort of animals heart.I looked at the alien who had threw it and he pointed at his mouth. Now I get it I have to eat this. I slowly put it to my mouth and took a bite.I spit it out instantly. What is this I yelled I can't eat garbage give me a burger or something I was banging the glass as hard as I could. I knew they wouldn't understand what I was saying but I needed to let my anger out. I was still tired so I went back to sleep,I was dreaming about home I couldn't help it. I knew the zoo would be opening so I should start expecting the tapping of glass so I woke up but I wasn't in the zoo I was at home! I looked on my Ipad at the calendar it was October 7th 5:00. I had missed my b-day but I was alive and back so I didn't really care.Phew I said as I laid back down and went to sleep without teleporting to an alien zoo.
by: Kiarah Valdovinos One day I woke up to be captured by aliens in a zoo I saw all the kids in my neighborhood were stuck in pens I stood in my pen terrified I tried to pinch myself and it didn't work by the way it was like we where prisoners he food they gave us was raw and old, their where new aliens every day and wanted to take all the pictures with their "children" the glass was ticker than anything I've ever seen it felt like years and years because it was one day I woke up to be found in the Gir Forest in India I was free I am a Lion, a lion dose not belong in a zoo.
I've been captured by aliens being their show of the day. There were other kids screaming for their lives being chased by aliens. For sure I was on Earth but where? I find little clues about where i'm at, Rio Vista Middle School. I recognize the tree that my friends and I always would hang out at. I look outside of my prison that I'm trapped in and see little aliens screaming and tapping my cell. Could this really be? I stand still terrified and thinking about an escape. A purple alien pounded on my cage and slips some oozing liquid in a cup and muttered some gibberish. I pick it up, smell it, examine it closely and toss it to the side. The aliens laugh at my decision. Is this how animals feel? No love just confused and scared? I scream in rage my loudest and find myself in bed sweaty and scared. Was it only a nightmare? An alien nurse comes in and checks my temperature. I try to hide my fear until it is gone. I sob for hours and hours. My life is now a prison.
If woke up from a strange nightmare and it came true, and I was captured by aliens I would think,"What the heck is happening". The first test I would to make sure I'm not asleep I wold slap myself as hard as I could. Once I'd figure out it was real life I would try to make friends with the aliens before they either eat me or put me in a cage. If they put me in a cage or a natural habitat I would just sleep or scream,"WHY ME". If I was stuck in that life I would just sleep till I die.
ReplyDeleteI would hide and find my way out to escape. I would feel very scared and lonely. When I get out I will run home and hide under my blankets.
ReplyDeleteIf I was captured by aliens and put in an alien zoo I would be really scared. When I get put in the zoo after the shock of it I would think of ways to get out of the zoo. If I ever got out I would tell all of the humans I see about it in case they come back for another human. If I never got back to earth I would still try to escape and get away from the aliens. If I never got out of the zoo I would just get used to it.
ReplyDeleteHank you think that you would not worry about never going to Earth again and just die in your sleep but I think that you would be worried about that.
ReplyDeleteNo I would not aliens are cool
ReplyDeleteIf I were captured by aliens I would probably feel really scared and shocked.But what I will do is I will try to talk to them and if the wont let me go will find a way to escape probably digging a hole out of there and once I get home I
ReplyDeletewill call the police and tell my parents what happened to me.
Avery I think your paragraph was will thought through and I like how you got into detail about how scared you would be.
ReplyDeleteAnela I like your paragraph you just need to think about how would you escape if you were captured and put in a zoo.
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ReplyDeleteAlien mind| Why is this meat talking we just brought it as lunch?
ReplyDeleteAlien mind 2| Why is the exibit moving I thought it was fake.
ReplyDeleteIf I was captured by aliens I would be freaked out. That is why we do not know what the aliens are capable of. And it would be good that they are in a zoo but it is still no safe enough. But I would be safer if it was in AREA 51 if it is real. and hopefully they would put the aliens back to there planet.
ReplyDeleteArea 51 is real just thought you should know it is a millitary base
ReplyDeleteNo known connection from aliens
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ReplyDeleteIf I were put in a alien zoo I would probably just accept their food and try to stay alive as long as I could. While I'm there I would think of a way to get out. Of course I would be scared but not as scared if I just sat there thinking "When will they kill me?" Although the aliens might have higher technology and IQ's. Yeah...
DeleteYou scare me
ReplyDeleteRead in a creepy voice but why be scared little one
ReplyDeleteNooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ReplyDeletestop it
ReplyDeletestop what human
ReplyDeleteIf i were captured and put in a alien zoo i would be terrified to be in side a cage.i could relate because it is like school you just want to get out and go home to relax and play out side.If i was there i would be very shocked for what i would do there.if they feed me i would be mad i would keep pinching my self to see if i was just dreaming or this is real.the next time they open the gates i would make a run for it but whit the technology that they have i have no chance of getting out but it would be worth a try.But after all it was just a dream or that is what i think.
ReplyDeleteYou need to add your name so I can give you a grade for this. Also, please always capitalize I.
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ReplyDeleteBy: Devon Solis
ReplyDeleteWell this is probably going down as the worst birthday ever. I was stuck in alien zoo (aka prison). And every time I scream for help it's like a lion roaring everybody cheers. I mean it sucks as it is but the aliens didn't even put a don"t touch the glass sign and that get's annoying quick. I've been marking the hours it's been at least 5. You're probably wondering how this happened. Well it was the day before my b-day,I had brushed my teeth and taken a shower.Right before I went to sleep I saw a shooting star well I was excited so I thought it was an alien ship.So I went to sleep imagining I was in a alien zoo I woke up expecting present's,but let me tell you I kind of want to return the one the alien's gave me. So I was stuck I had like 3 big rocks for me to climb a watering hole and a bucket where they put my food in when I was asleep.It's not like I got much though I was constantly hearing the tapping on the glass and I missed earth and silence. The next day I felt a plop on my shoulder I woke up to find some sort of animals heart.I looked at the alien who had threw it and he pointed at his mouth. Now I get it I have to eat this. I slowly put it to my mouth and took a bite.I spit it out instantly. What is this I yelled I can't eat garbage give me a burger or something I was banging the glass as hard as I could. I knew they wouldn't understand what I was saying but I needed to let my anger out. I was still tired so I went back to sleep,I was dreaming about home I couldn't help it. I knew the zoo would be opening so I should start expecting the tapping of glass so I woke up but I wasn't in the zoo I was at home! I looked on my Ipad at the calendar it was October 7th 5:00. I had missed my b-day but I was alive and back so I didn't really care.Phew I said as I laid back down and went to sleep without teleporting to an alien zoo.
GG bro Brandon S
DeleteI really enjoyed reading this, Devon. You are so creative, and hilarious!
ReplyDeleteby: Kiarah Valdovinos
ReplyDeleteOne day I woke up to be captured by aliens in a zoo I saw all the kids in my neighborhood were stuck in pens I stood in my pen terrified I tried to pinch myself and it didn't work by the way it was like we where prisoners he food they gave us was raw and old, their where new aliens every day and wanted to take all the pictures with their "children" the glass was ticker than anything I've ever seen it felt like years and years because it was one day I woke up to be found in the Gir Forest in India I was free I am a Lion, a lion dose not belong in a zoo.
One day i woke up and i go outside to get in y car and i saw aliens and a lot of people trapped inside cages with aliens in them too.
ReplyDeleteby: Sirena Romero
ReplyDeleteI've been captured by aliens being their show of the day. There were other kids screaming for their lives being chased by aliens. For sure I was on Earth but where? I find little clues about where i'm at, Rio Vista Middle School. I recognize the tree that my friends and I always would hang out at. I look outside of my prison that I'm trapped in and see little aliens screaming and tapping my cell. Could this really be? I stand still terrified and thinking about an escape. A purple alien pounded on my cage and slips some oozing liquid in a cup and muttered some gibberish. I pick it up, smell it, examine it closely and toss it to the side. The aliens laugh at my decision. Is this how animals feel? No love just confused and scared? I scream in rage my loudest and find myself in bed sweaty and scared. Was it only a nightmare? An alien nurse comes in and checks my temperature. I try to hide my fear until it is gone. I sob for hours and hours. My life is now a prison.
The one thing that scars me going down my hallway and feel like someones watching me.
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